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Láska na lodi 1/-

20. července 2013 v 15:39 | Angie |  Láska na lodi
Poviedka mojej dobréj kamarátky Angie!


Jedného dňa som išiel ( Sasuke Uchiha ) na lod ,pretože ma k tomu prinútili moji kamaráti . Bola aj celkom zábava pokým som nezazrel jedno krásne ružovlasé dievča. Mala krásne zelené oči , do ktorých ked sa pozriete zabudnete na všetko , myslíte iba na to ,že ked sa priblížite tak nechcete odísť. Chcel som sa k nej ozvať , ale bola so svojimi kamarátkami a tak som to nechal tak, myslel som že ked sme na lodi tak bude veľa príležitostí sa k nej ozvať.
Ako som išiel spať , zistil som že na ňu nemôžem prestať myslieť,nemohol som kôli tomu spať,chcel som ju znovu vidieť.. musel som ju znovu vidieť . Potom mi napadlo ... '' nemôžem ju ľúbiť,nesmiem ,musím sa od nej držať dalej .'' Na druhý deň sme išli s kamarátmi na tzv. '' party hard '' kde som ju stretol .... nevedel som od nej odtrhnúť oči. Môj najlepší kamarát Naruto mi povedal aby som išiel za ňou a prihovoril som sa k nej , ale malo to háčik bavila sa tam s inými chalanmi a ja som proste .. no nemohol som , je to ťažké povedať čo cítite ked ani sami neviete či to tak je... chcete byť s tou osobou, ale stále vám v tom niečo bráni, strach z odmietnutia . KONEČNE ! dozvedel som sa jej meno Sakura Haruno ... myslel som na to .. no skôr predstavoval aké by to mohlo byť ked budeme spolu a tak som sa rozhodol,že pôjdem za ňou a prihovorím sa k nej . ,, Ahoj ja som Sasuke Uchiha , a už dlho som chcel ísť za tebou .. '' ' ,, tak prečo si nerišiel ? '' ,, ja som nevedel ako mám začať reč .. no vieš si pekná a tak som sa ťa chcel opýtať či by si niekedy nechcela ísť no so mnou na rande ako so mnou ,ale iba ak chceš do ničoho ťa nenútim .... ale ako vidím tak asi nie ahoj a prepáč že som ťa vyrušil . '' ,, počkaj ! ja by som išla rada ešte nikto nebol tak nervozny ked bol u mňa si roztomilý rada pôjdem ''

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Takže Bubáčikovia toto je prvá časť,ktorú som nenapísala ja ale moja dobrá kamarátka. Písanie ju začalo baviť docela veľa :P.. Dúfam že si ju ako začínajúcu autorku obľúbite. :3
Koľko častí bude mať poviedka Láska na lodi je neznáme.Ale verím že bude mať úspech. Preto prosíme HVIEZDIČKY a komentár s názorom :3

vaša Kajka-chan,Angie,Vava
 

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1 Janča-san | Web | 20. července 2013 v 21:56 | Reagovat

zaujímavé... ale nie je to zlé :D

2 Aki-chan | Web | 21. července 2013 v 10:24 | Reagovat

Celkom pekné.

3 Viola | E-mail | Web | 22. července 2013 v 19:37 | Reagovat

Boli tam nejaké chybičky ale .. všetky sme nejako začínali no nie?! n.n
Treba niekde začať ;) Podľa mňa si na dobrej ceste! ^^ Nabudúce si prosím dlhšiu časť :D

4 tete vs saky | 27. července 2013 v 11:07 | Reagovat

Je to fajn :-) páči sa  mi to neviem sa dočkať dalšej časti °°

5 Michyseji | Web | 29. července 2013 v 8:46 | Reagovat

ahoj , no ked som si prečítala názov myslela si , že to bude niečo podobné ako píšem teraz ja , ale naštastie nie , to mi odlahlo , pretože tá poviedka je o pirátoch a tak a dúfam , že zatial nikto nebude mať podobný námet , pretože som ju vymyselela na lodi hehe :D

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